Love Surreal

by Blutonium Boy   Nov 23, 2005


What is this feeling that I feel?
I sometimes ask if this is real,
A single glance at you I steal,
And then my thoughts turn so surreal.

In your beauty I laid my trust,
You're in my heart and I feel it bust,
Our feelings together we did discuss,
We both agreed it wasn't lust.

I don't want this to ever end,
How many flowers do I have to send?
How many hours do I have to spend?
For you to see my love transcend.

Your silent green eyes set me free,
I will love you forever and hope you agree,
And in this world I hope you will see,
That no one will be there for you quite like me.

So when you start to feel down and out,
Call me up and give me a shout,
I will be there to lend a shoulder to pout,
A caring boyfriend you won't be without.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    Great poem. The rhyme scheme was great. I liked the flow. It was very sweet. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    Good poem