I forgive you mommy!

by amy   Nov 23, 2005


Mommy mommy please don't cry
daddy daddy i hope you die
for all the pain you caused us here
you hurt mommy, now we are living in fear

mommy mommy there's a knock at the door,oh no its daddy... hes only counting till four...oh hurry mommy please do something now, daddy might get mad, stop daddy owe!

MOMMY MOMMY SAVE ME PLEASE!
i can't take this, he has a real tight squeeze, mommy quick save me please, I'm begging you mommy I'm down on my knees

mommy mommy please don't cry, it was my time, i had to die, ill wacth you from heaven, with my very own eye

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  • 18 years ago

    by amy

    Thanks.. but i was talking about her birth dad being evil.. and then.. her heaven;t father (god) being the one to save her and tel her to tell her mom not to worry.. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael Young

    Lol
    Your poem is excellent
    Yet a little confusing,
    One minute the dad was evil
    The next he was telling your mum not to live in fear 0.o
    Oh well still good =] 5/5