When will I say my final good-bye?

by Michelle   Nov 23, 2005


Please vote/comment and I will return the favor. Thanks!!!!

When I left your office today,
I was very hurt,
From what you had to say.

You want me to see a man,
All I can do is wonder why,
You think you understand.
But; now, I\'m beginning to cry.

This scares me more,
Thinking of this matter,
As I walk out your door.

What did I do wrong?
What did I say?
That changes what,
She thinks of me today.

You think all I do is lie,
This won\'t change the person I am,
When I choose to die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    That was an amazing poem. I have read all of your poems and they are all really good. Keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem.

    Luv Chantelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    This poem is really good, its truly amazing keep upthe good work

    lots of love
    *~*becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I liked it but lors right it could have been done better but still very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    I Think this poem has alot of potential to be wonderful, but it seems like you comprimised the overall quality and what you were really trying to say just to make it rhyme. Maybe try wrighting it over with out thinking about the rhyme, just to see if it turns out better. Good attempt though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Really liked your poem, very sad. Great writing, well done x

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