Answer Me

by Charles   Nov 24, 2005


Am i not cool, cos i do not wear my trousers down to the floor and act like a fool

will i not be accepted into your crowd cos i'm not proud, yet you still degrade me to the ground, fouler than the foulest owl

search into the deepest depths of my warm and misunderstood heart and ask me why i feel this way

you haven't asked me yet, i'm starting to fret, i ask you again and still you shake your head.

by the time you finish reading this, they would have already pronounced me dead...

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  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    Great poem. i love the way u put so many feelings in ur poems. i really like this poem! great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Hey i kno i like jus commented but i want to clearify what i meant... what i meant was that it SEEMED to be forced... not the feelings just the words. and i may just not understand cuz i am only 13. neway, i still think ur an awesome writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    The over all feel to this is seriously sad and i get it but i think that some of the times you rhymed or some of the words were to forced like "fouler than the foulest owl"
    but like i said, over all it was really sad and has a great message in it... keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written, I really like it.
    Hope you're OK though. take care xx:

    *> : PainOfOne [5/5]

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Great poem, I can relate to it but i dont really care what other people think or do but i know the feeling that is portrayed in this poem. Great work

    Luv Chantelle

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