by kevin Nov 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Sorrow pain and horror |
by BeeJay
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First of all... I think you should edit the funky characters that this site adds... Other than that... the flow was very good, I really liked it, and I can relate a lot too... but this poem touched me... My favorite part was the beginning... it had PERFECT flow and it was beautiful! I wish you the best of luck... Great poem, keep writing! |
by firechk
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Fantastic poem..keep it up! |
by Beebee
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:) good jjobb!!! |
by Void
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Hey that's really well written, I read it twice and the only complaint I have is the random symbols -it's a lil distracting. But it's very well written though and you express nicely. Well done :) |
by this love
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Wow, this is a beautiful poem. i like it alot |