My Earnings

by Extinct Angel   Nov 25, 2005


No more tears shall I shed
To all of you Mike is now dead
My dad opened the Demon in me
A demon stronger than before
The pain is much more intense
My death lays in suspense
When will that dream come true?
When will my blood turn to red from blue?
I only bleed out my Demons
Tears no longer hold satisfaction
Cutting my wrist is the only action
This is my plan of attack
After I bleed there's no turning back
I'm at the point of no return
Deaths peaceful slumber is what I've earned!

*these are only feelings for now but my dad is pushing me more each day so please beware and I'm sorry if he pushes too far*

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  • 18 years ago

    by dwight

    I commented another poem of yours and said, the ideas and so on were good, but the poem wasn't that good. I loved this poem though and therefore you deserve a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I hope that you make it through this, I know how hard it can be to resist ending it all but live in hope. You have great talent and from previous comments a lot of people would miss you. You will find your way, be strong, and never let anyone get the best of you. There is a place for you in this world, and you will find it if you hold on.
    Best wishes,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Wow very nice and I hope everyting does work out take care--RAchel--

  • Kinda short, but yeah I thought it was good with the whole demon idea in it. It's depressing when you write poems like these, I hope things get better
    well done hun xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    I know how it feels, to feel that u want to die, that there is no way out of your world, that there is know light at the end of the road, but there is, i am one who has seen it , you have to remember to keep the ones you love close and remember that they need u... think about that..
    robyn