Here i am dying

by *heidi;   Nov 25, 2005


I'm sitting on the floor
behind this closed door
nothing am i able to stand
so i have a razorblade at hand
i slide it across my arm
causing so much harm
out comes the blood
just as a flood
i drop the blade
my sight starts to fade
I'm now crying
not to mention,dying
I'll soon be dead
so 'thank you' i said
blood still pouring,tears now dry
in 3...2...1...i die...

{{it sounds out of rhytym at the end but u have to read it correctly with the dot dot dot silence in it and itll sound right}}

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good. I don't want this to happen to me. I cut and i do it to deep. Thats my only fear. But i do like this poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by smiles♥

    HEY! THATS AWSOME POEM!! I LOVE IT!!!!! ON A SCALE OF 10 I"D SAY 20!!!!! :)

    thanks for leavign a coment on mine to!

    xox kaylin

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Hey i really like your poem it very good you should read and comment my poems( save me & are you really ready) pEaCe OuT~~~ LiNdA

  • 17 years ago

    by AllCutUp

    I really lyked that poem deffinite 5/5
    ~xXx AllCutUp xXx~

  • 18 years ago

    by Cutesal

    This is excellent, i cn relate x

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