You broke me.

by Steven Rhodes   Nov 27, 2005


You broke my heart once.
Yet i still longed for you.
You broke my heart twice.
I toke it and forgave you.
You broke my heart again.
now i just want my life to end.
You broke my heart completely.
What are you in this for?
Now i lay heartless on the floor.

Well i didn't have much time but i wrote that while playing AASF and if you like it thanks if not ill try harder. Well Comment me or get on AIM and message NoGodCanSaveYou if you wanna talk.

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  • 18 years ago

    by _-*Broken*-_

    Good poem..Excellent...Keep it up..

    wishes u the best

    XxX
    Tess

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    I think its cool
    I don't understand why we take them back, but you learn from your mistakes RIGHT

    The last two lines need improving all in all KEEP IT UP
    B

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