My Story

Aww.. such a sad poem.. :'( ... hope you feel better..

Why is this world so unfair to you?
it seems that god has lost his reason, giving good people bad stuff.
i ve run out of good things to say about your great poetry.
"He knew i loved him...
with all my heart..."
the girl whom i loved didnt even think that i loved her....she tells me that im getting mad at her for saying that she is embarrassed to be seen with me....
and that if i get *mad* that way, i dont know what it is to love somebody.

oh god, end this god forsaken life.

shit, i cant stop writing abt my story... sure u mustve read it somewhere before lol....GREAT POEMMMMMM!!!

dhaval
ps: dont forget that friendship offer of mine
can we be friends? i dont even no your name!

Omg...so sad, but so good. If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to come to me anytime and I'll try to help out. You're very talented, keep up the great work!

That was a really amazing poem. Ive felt like that at times. Thanks so much for commenting on mine. Im going to read more of your poems now because i really wloved this one. Great Work

Luv Chantelle

P:S: My friends call me emo if they read my poems too lol oh and i love mcr and the used too!

So now i'm writin the story on my wrist... That is so beautiful! That is my favorite line! (So short, yet so thought provoking and so full of emotion.) I love the story behind the poem. I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up! I love your work!