Ahaha, oh how cute!

And the way your fingers intertwine with mine, like the way the garland and the Christmas lights combine

I love that part! keep on writing! 5/5 ;)

Do you always write so descriptive? I gotta hand it to you. It's good. I'm beginning to think you write better than I do. Keep up the good work!!
xxxxx Mary

I enjoyed this poem a lot!
you wrote it with wonderful expression!
fantastic poem 5/5 keep up the wonderful job!

Damn girl this is prolly the sweetest poem i've ever read, great job

LOOOOVING YOUR DETAIL..
Wow AMAZING...AMAZING
5/5 thts all i can say
~The Poet~