Dear god

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Nov 27, 2005


Can you hear me
i know you are there
why aren't you listening?
don't you care?

my life seems so pointless
i feel so empty inside
it hurts so much
would it be easier if i died?

why does this keep happening to me?
what have i done wrong?
i feel so rejected
but i know i have the power to keep on

to keep on going
to live this life you gave me
cause you and me we're partners
and we'll walk on to victory

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Feel This Way All The Time! I Can Relate To This Poem 101%....It Was Almost Scary How Your Feelings And Emotions In This Poem Match Mind, You Were Born To Write *Friends For Life* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Wow, that was very powerful. I feel like this at times too. Just don't let it get to you too much. Keep writing and take care. And thanks for the comment on mine, it means a lot.
    > Kiesha

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