Long poem - My life

by Amanda   Nov 28, 2005


Today I saw a young girl sat on her own,
I asked her to tell me why she was alone,
She smiled at me sweetly and said she was fine,
Next thing I know her hand is placed in mine,

She whispered in my ear a song she once knew,
For when she feels lonely, frightened and blue,
Her eyes grew dark and filled up with tears,
Her dad used to sing it to get rid of her fears,

Her dad had just left her, her mum was gone too,
I felt a lump in my throat, did not know what to do,
So I held her close and said she would be alright,
She sobbed in her dreams all through the night,

Her life was so bad and her experience was cruel,
If I walked away and left her then I would be a fool,
So many people have just pushed her to one side,
21 years of just wanting to run away and hide,

Got to make her strong and teach her to fight,
Convince her she is loved and show her the light,
Got to stand by her right through to the end,
She has nobody else and I am her only real friend,

I decided to take care of her and give her all I had,
My love and attention to make up for the bad,
I stood in the mirror just so that I could see,
The young girl I met was just a reflection of me!

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 18 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Great job. Its an excellant poem. I love the way you explained it so perfectly.

  • 18 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Wow it was really sweet at the beguining and the twist was cool alot of poems on this site has a twist but you really get so much into the poem you dont think untill the end. it was really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Wow this was a really good poem. There was so much emotion in it and it had a really great twist. I really liked it. nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Another sad poem. This one was my favourite. A lot of details, alot of emotion and I felt sad reading this. I enjoyed it, thanks for the read :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Oh my god.. while readin it i was holding my breath ... a girl in my class is like her.. then it ended up being u .. m reallly sorry .. thats so sad.. nd i know how it feels.. ur poemis amazing