Collaborated Color

by Nathan   Nov 28, 2005


The atmosphere spreads under stars in their choir
With piebald black clouds to mull and admire
And above all the mortals engrossing their vile
The heavens sit quiet; there all the while

Our galaxy mauve, like long rendered sleep
Whose lucent reflections entice you to stare
And glimmers of cosmos still rave, lark, and leap
It's had to explain; I wish you'd been there

Perplex violent rainbows with euphoric sensation
uncover inducements to mock men's creation
Harrowing shadows, cornering slightly
awkwardly subtle, grasping me tightly

Night! in your moiety of a rare equinox
Two times a year you show up distraught
Begrudgingly helping the day-light you stalk
What vulgar intent you willingly wrought

And oh of the Sun and the shadows she's chased
Sanguinely floating in voluminous size
And all of her flames, when evenly spaced
Would depict such illusions I'd swear they were lies

Asteroidal communities of alloy fused rock
Glide massive scarred bodies instinctively casting
past lonely bleak planets whom waft like a flock
Through the burdened monotony of night ever lasting

When one lonely comet lambasted our sphere
Incinerating deleteriously to the brink of his heart
Showering the earth with silver streaked tears
Scorching the wind as he plummets apart .

Astronomica what beauty you behold
I hallow thy being and die to appease
Sincerely more precious then diamonds and gold
I laud thy creator and fall to my knees

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  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    You truly are an amazing writer. you have so much talent! i read your poem 'the horse' the other day, and went absolutely crazy, and i apologise for the rambling comment. but after reading 'the night i sleep', i realised just how fantastic your poetry is! i had to read the others then and this just stood out as brilliant.

    Perplex violent rainbows with euphoric sensation
    uncover inducements to mock men's creation
    Harrowing shadows, cornering slightly
    awkwardly subtle, grasping me tightly

    you have a wonderful grasp on language, and have manipulated i to produce a stunning poem. Your use of an oxymoron adds interest and deepens the poem, and your vocabulary is wonderfully rich. i enjoyed this poem so much!!!

    it also makes sense to me, in the wonderful way poetry is. a fantastic piece. you are now one of my 'favourites'. do keep writing as you have such talent.

    ~sa~

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan

    Hope you like this.