Lay There Motionless

Strate to the point. ending chang everything. awesoming:)

Wats up with jennifer she writes so much and only got 1 point out that the poems arnt anything 2 do with her... wow and y on this right here?... im so lost y people do things

Thank you for commenting on my poem wow i took long time u commented like 2005 but anyways i loved this poem its so deep. idk y people say they can relate to the poems where like 90% felt nothing of it. what do they mean thet can relate wat wirting a poem maybe. if u want to talk Plagued_With_Darkness@hotmail.com any time u want to just add me and we can talk about anything so then... well yeah...

I havn't read this yet this is a resonse to my heaven is a fairytale poem. DUDE IT'S A POEM!!!!!!!! how many times do i have to freaking say that most of my poems aren't based on anything?!?! i'm not angery and i don't want u to be angery at me either but can i just get this point across?!? i've said it many times and i decided i'd just let it slip for a while as u continued to commplement me on my miserable poems and what a horrible life i must have had but they're poems! i take pleasure out of writing them i soke in the sadness but i do not feel it. they're just poems. they aren't from emotions or pasted things. most ppls are and that's y ppl r misled even though in my profile i state that my pomes r basicly untrue things not based off of anyting except for like 6 of them. oh and so ya know u didn't witness any of that jesus christ stuff it's all 2nd person and we have no proof what so ever. i don't want to get in a big conversation about that though because i'll probably upset you and then u'd stop commenting and rating and you're the only one that does that so i would be upset that i upset you not just because of the lack of comments but because i like to know that someone looks up to my work like u do. and i wouldn't want someone like that hating me over religious beliefs. but anyways can u just please understand that those poems come from nothing. they're just poems....there r only so many that i feel r true...but the majority of them r just there..please understand that.

You're a really good writer, I can relate to your words..I know we don't know each other, but if you want to talk you can email me or just leave a comment. You're a very strong person for writing all these feelings down. And thanks for leaving me a comment.