Dad where r u??

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Nov 29, 2005


Daddy where are you?
you\'ve been gone so long,
daddy can you come home,
and tell me nothings wrong?

daddy tell me its just a dream,
and you\'ll be home real soon,
daddy can you hear me scream,
or see my iternal wounds?

daddy do you no i love you?
i hope im like you wanted,
daddy do you no i miss it wen,
you to tucked me in my bed?

daddy do you no im sorry,
for anything ive done wrong?
daddy can you please come home,
and show me nothings wrong!!!

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  • 6 years ago

    by Trisha Harris

    So touching. Thank you for sharing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    Of course u can.... if my poem helps someone else some how, id love to give u permission

  • 17 years ago

    by xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx

    This one was very touching...i know someone who is grieving for her father to come back...you think...i could give this poem to her under your name? i'd really appreciate it if i had the permission...

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Very sad. I kept on getting an image of a little girl crying for her daddy in my head. I loved this one girlie. Great job! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by NoPatience

    Wow, This Poem Is Completely Amazing. And One In Which I Can Honestly Relate To. I Lost My Father To Cancer 2 Years Ago.

    But You Spelt Know Wrong.... Lol

    x0x LoveLustTragedy x0x

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