The pain within her soul

by just a poet   Nov 29, 2005


Inside her soul i look,
she stares back at me,
tears fill her eyes,
worse can never be.

her Friend's have deserted her,
they have stabbed her in the back,
after all she has done for them,
this is how they say their thanks.

she stood up for them no matter what,
she stayed strong,
on her shoulder they cried,
but no matter now,
they have made it clear,
they have left her for another.

her best Friend tried to steal her man from her,
after a while she succeeded,
her other friend has a spaz,
and made her seem like a monster.

while she alone and in need of help,
they all let her be,
not one of them asked her how she was,
the other had their blessings,
but she never heard their pleas.

they try to get back with me,
pretend nothing is wrong,
but i know all that they have done,
and i cannot go one.

so as i look at that beautiful girl,
whose soul has been broken,
whose trust has been lost,
whose kindness has been hidden.

i realize i am looking at,
nothing but a mirror,
and back at me stares my reflection,
her eyes filled with so much doubt,
the only thing being evident,
the pain within her soul!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was soo good!!..and dont give up!...i loved this!!...5/5 comment back pleaseee!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bubbles

    Don't give up girl... this poem was amazing.. just remember that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    That Is Such A Gr8 Poem! A True Friend Fills A Place In Your Heart That You Never Knew Was Empty!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dolores DLF

    Girl that was so pretty. Keep UR chin up. You will find that friends come plenty but a true friend will stay forever. Good luck. Take Care. Bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Jacobsen

    Again , great work.I know exactly what you're talkin about hun.Perfect understandin. And perfect reasons about how her friends are. Great work. I rated it a *5*.