Dragon Spirit

by Spirit   Nov 29, 2005


My Mighty Wings Are Beating
My Grand Heart Repeating
The Terrible Heat Of My Fire
Give My Heart A Great Desire
No One Can See Me
The Air Disguises Me
None Shall Touch My Face
The Wind Give My Body Grace
I Swim, I Walk,
I Fly, I Talk
No One Can Catch Me
I'm Wild And Free
Go Away I'm Fierce And Unashamed
I'm The Who Can't Be Tamed
Hide From Me Just Don't Scream
I'm The One Who'll Reign Supreme
I'm Better Than You, Don't You See
The Dragon Spirit Arise In Me

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    You had me at,

    Give My Heart A Great Desire

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this...beautifully written and original and unique in concept, and kept me interested throughout.

    Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion and that isn't always easy to do.

    Flow was perfect throughout and the imagery created vivid pictures for me.

    I love the ending, I found it to be intense and powerful.

    The only thing I didn't like was all the caps. It hurt my eyes.

    But other than that, I have no criticism about this piece.

    Just...beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    What a wonderful job!
    I loved how it seemed/if not you where, comparing yourself to a dragon.
    I loved the peice. The Word choice was brilliant, and flowed nicely.

    Well done,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is fantastic I'm quite surprised nobody has commented on it yet, the flow and word choice are amazing. You really did a fantastic job with this piece, great work 5/5 GG23

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