Beauty in the eye of the Beholder

by The Flame Within   Nov 30, 2005


Where has my breath gone, why cant my eyes close
that smile, perfect, flawless, i cant move
your beauty steals my breath, i cant help but stare
i never did believe such beauty as yours
but i have converted my thoughts
with you as my evidence, i know now that there is beauty like this
my words are gone, my tongue frozen
i wouldn\'t say anything anyways
such beauty knows no words
but if i could ask you one question
it would be
\"Where are your wings\"

*a bit corny but eh lol*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Its good..i like it alot hun. Keep up the great work up!!!

    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    Not at all. That was beautiful and amazing. Very cute and inspiring. lol. Nice question though....I loved how that had like...well..actually it had SOMETHING to do with the first part, but like..it just came out of nowhere..not what i was expecting at all. Very nice though. Love you lots!

    ~Sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by Cait

    Hey that was good! not corny at all!