Wow.........brilliant poem. the flow and structure are great and the content amazing...

I like all the little details you put into this poem. Makes in easy to imagine the situation. Good poem :)

Great poem! 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

How about its amazing... wow you did a terrific job... this is a wonderful poem... keep it up

sammie

Omg this poem is so awesome
it had very good imagery i lovedthe wording really 5/5

Wow beautiful poem, great imagery!! i love your work!

-court-

Wow awsome poem. I loved it. it has good flow. keep up the good work.

~Italianstallion A.K.A. Joe~

That was beautiful. it was almost two seperate poems. i loved the imagry

Ruby

I loved it! That was awesome, you got a story across along with lots of description. Amazing job!

Very Descriptive!, Alot Of Emotion That Evolved From Pure Talent....I Was Empressed With This Poem Overall....Keep It Up 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

The details were good and so was the word choice. The imagery was great. Towards the end there was a stanza that threw the flow off a little though the flow was still fine.
~DFTI

Well written, good imagery, and good words
keep it up
xxx
tara xxx

Very good... but is that last line Except? or did you mean for it to not make sense

Loved it! especially the first half. It was fantastic. The choice of words you put in was excellent.

Amazing poem! You are very talented! You are getting very good, very fast. Sad, intense emotion. Great write.

PS. The poem was about my ex.

Thought provoking

Refreshingly different, it really stands out among the rest of the depressing poems. beautifully written, keep up the good work! xoxo~Catalina

Oh, nice imagery. Great job

Wow... great poem.

Wow hun i love the poem very deep i can feel the pain in it keep up ther good work 5.5 and thanks for the comment and vote.