I love how u wrote this and with the "twist" at the end its great work keep it up xox rc

Thanks alot ;)

Huni i love this, its a really great story, im happy that u found the 1 u love at last, u deserve it...well u r on my favourites list, i love ur work, keep shining! luv ya

Huni i love this, its a really great story, im happy that u found the 1 u love at last, u deserve it...well u r on my favourites list, i love ur work, keep shining! luv ya

Another truely awesome poem!!~~
Tisha~

Wow...i feel the exact same way...i love how u expressed ur feelings in this poem..i give it a 5/5 because u really deserved it...i have to say that u need to write more poems...because i love love love them...keep it up and keep in touch

I loved this...im so happy you found somebudy worth loving...5/5...i love reading your poems

AMAZING...!! REALLY SAD..>!!!:(( .....thanks for commenting on all of my poems..HUN:)..love u
valeria

I love this!

-Taylor

Hey darl. a very t0uching piece. very well written. g0od j0b 0n this hun! keep em c0ming!

This poem is so great and I totally understand it. I love it, I wish I had the strength to say no to my past, but I dont. I cant imagine a world without him.....but this poem made me understand I am not the only one that dreams of moving on. Love it, great work!!!!

::MELI::

Hey love that poem so cool, unexpected ending nice job!!

Wow ur poems r really really inspirational
keep it up, ur great

Very nice piece of work, well written and good story about moving on....really liked it alot.

Wow!!! that was the cutest poem i have ever read in my life. simply perfect. i love the words and also the great meaning it has. thanks so much for the comment, ill be sure to return and read some more. byee
~lilia~

Aw this is reallly reallly cute. i like it soo much. 5/5. thanks for the comment to me too!

WOW!!! SO INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!

I love this, it's very sweet. I love how you described what he meant to you.

I dont know which one to comment on! they all rock! completely!
i love your poems- u r sooo going on my favourites now...

.x abbi x.

Well done. I enjoy your rhyming scheme.

Thank you for your comments by the way.