Choke

Aww thats cute lol 5/5

A little line. said with such strong emotion.

i wonder if somone love another , even ti dotn work out he wil hate him that much?

who si better than who? and why a person that meant soo dear to you is soo bad now.

i dont really approve teh way you say those, and i beleve if you are really better than him , you will say ,god be with you and have a good life , and may god give you as much that you given me.

wishing harm to pepole is a bad thinking , in my opignion. no matter how they hurt you or how much. sitll say what goes arround comes arround ,

who break heart , will propably will get his heart broken too.

and many things more.

soo short word that express a lot , very glade you post this feeling so we can share it

CJ

This is good you put a lot of emotion in such a short poem.

U need to work on some of tham

Wow...this is strong..love dia mwaz xoxo