Let me bleed...Vampire Angel Part 2

by Nina Star   Dec 2, 2005


The Vampire Angel wants to bleed,
the angel has no blood,
shes just a sprit,
her body, clear you can see throught it.
The Vampire Angel longs the feel,
The cold of the blade,
Of the warm trickle of blood,
She longs to say her favourite words,
The way she used to when she was live,
The way she used to when she was down.
That last night,
She went to deep,
She screamed out loud "Let Me Bleed",
She slits her wrists,
she ends her life,
Her husband cries out for his loving wife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    I like the way its different from your others

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

    Gr8 poem keep up the gd work
    ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by demolitionmegan

    Where was her husband when she was going through all this?

  • Interesting poem, nice concept.
    I liked it.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kenshin Himura

    Nice .. ..

    Pretty different from what I'm used to reading so it's awsome! 5/5