A Shattered Doll Of Perfection

by Forsaken Redeemer   Dec 7, 2005


Black tears falling
Down her cheeks,
The pain eating away,
As it has done for weeks.
Blood falling down,
And endless tears flowing,
Walking dazed through this life,
Without ever knowing.
Arms and legs criss-crossed
With bloody trails,
Her mind and body shattered,
Her soul torn and frail.
Spending her life
Hiding deep inside,
No one understands her,
All the times she's died.
So she's falling and falling,
With no hope of peace,
And she'll struggle on through life,
With no hope of release.
Mascara smudged,
Crying on the floor,
More tears and more pain,
She can't take anymore.
A shattered doll of perfection,
Scarred and dirty porcelain,
She can't fight this any longer,
These feelings will win.

©Copyright of Holly Nia Goodson

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  • Wow that was really really powerful, i found it to be very very well written i really liked it ... i liked this part

    So she's falling and falling,
    With no hope of peace,
    And she'll struggle on through life,
    With no hope of release.

    a lot very good nice job and keep up the work

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Extremely unique and creative, formed a great picture in my head and expressed alot of emotion. Good job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Noo dont let them win!!
    hun you are amazing, im adding you to my favs...
    this poem...god i love it..honestly.
    Im actually speachless...
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Really good poem...5/5