Comments : Broken Little Girl

  • 15 years ago

    by Narcissism

    Thats really good, keep writting emma you seem very talented

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany

    I thought it was awesome. I've been writing for... it seems like forever but only have one here. You're very very talented.

  • 15 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    This poem was amazing. It flowed really well and was really great to read. Fantastic!! I loved it!!! Guess what? lol i live in australia too!! But thank you so much for your comment it was greatly appreciated!!
    luv jess xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hey this poem was awesome! You did a really great job on it. You write so amazing. Every word flowed so nicely. Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing write none to less, I loved the flow and the wording. Keep writing and take care. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 15 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem, really flows well and the content is amazing.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by AJ

    Hey, very nice write, I've read a few like this before but yours is the first one to really stand out.

  • 15 years ago

    by RObC

    WoW that was a freaking postivley great poem keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I really like this poem. It express over the years how you seemed to have lost that inner girl who love to play.

  • 15 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    A good poem i can relate to it very well
    absolutly great i loved it! 5/5 keep it up
    ~pip xoxXxox

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The flow remained even through the revealing poem

  • 15 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5 for this one as well.. i love sad poems... yeah the transformation over the years hurts... been thru that... !
    lovely poem !
    love
    amy

  • 15 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    WOW...I love your style. Your words were well chosen and it flowed nicely...Thanks for the comment I always return the favor =)

  • 15 years ago

    by nightschild

    What an excellent poem
    you write very well,
    its sad but beautiful
    well done 5/5
    xoxoxoxox

  • 15 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    That was an excellent poem, great story...I have to say that, cause it sounds alot like a poem I wrote last year called suicidal girl =0) Very touching ending and deeply written, keep up the good work =0)

    Hugs Sabrina

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Good write! We all hide behind walls/mirrors at various times in our lives and sometimes it's hard to see the "true me".

  • 15 years ago

    by holly

    That was really good, i like your style this poem is so true to life keep it up xxALLYxx

  • 15 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye i lyked dis....5\5....love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by eliza austria

    Its very good,i like it.keep up the good work..take care,

  • 14 years ago

    by Raven

    Amazing poem.... Explains my life. Did you write it for me? LOL.

    Great job!