Thats really good, keep writting emma you seem very talented

I thought it was awesome. I've been writing for... it seems like forever but only have one here. You're very very talented.

This poem was amazing. It flowed really well and was really great to read. Fantastic!! I loved it!!! Guess what? lol i live in australia too!! But thank you so much for your comment it was greatly appreciated!!
luv jess xoxo

Hey this poem was awesome! You did a really great job on it. You write so amazing. Every word flowed so nicely. Keep it up!

Amazing write none to less, I loved the flow and the wording. Keep writing and take care. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Brilliant poem, really flows well and the content is amazing.

5/5

Hey, very nice write, I've read a few like this before but yours is the first one to really stand out.

WoW that was a freaking postivley great poem keep it up :)

I really like this poem. It express over the years how you seemed to have lost that inner girl who love to play.

A good poem i can relate to it very well
absolutly great i loved it! 5/5 keep it up
~pip xoxXxox

The flow remained even through the revealing poem

5/5 for this one as well.. i love sad poems... yeah the transformation over the years hurts... been thru that... !
lovely poem !
love
amy

WOW...I love your style. Your words were well chosen and it flowed nicely...Thanks for the comment I always return the favor =)

What an excellent poem
you write very well,
its sad but beautiful
well done 5/5
xoxoxoxox

That was an excellent poem, great story...I have to say that, cause it sounds alot like a poem I wrote last year called suicidal girl =0) Very touching ending and deeply written, keep up the good work =0)

Hugs Sabrina

Good write! We all hide behind walls/mirrors at various times in our lives and sometimes it's hard to see the "true me".

That was really good, i like your style this poem is so true to life keep it up xxALLYxx

Aye i lyked dis....5\5....love dia mwaz xoxo

Its very good,i like it.keep up the good work..take care,

Amazing poem.... Explains my life. Did you write it for me? LOL.

Great job!