Behind the smile

by sammy jo   Dec 8, 2005


Behide the smile

everyday she walks around with a smile and a laugh, she laughs and smiles at everyone. but there is something other then a smile. theres a razor, and her arm. behide the smile is a boy that the girl loves, there is her father that she doesnt know if she wants to love him or hate him. there is a mother who she wants to hate but cant there is a grandmother who she loved and never seen intill she died. behind the smile is a joint and the girls mouth,she uses to fack her smile everyday, behind the smile is a girl crying because she dosent know what to do with her life, behind the smile there is a girl wanting to died but doesnt want to let people down.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *fading*away*

    This was fantastic! I know how it feels to pretend like everything's OK..when it truly isn't!
    i loved your poem and thanks for pasting this! 10/10!
    keep Writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    A powerful and sad poem, well done. I hope you do not mind a bit of critique, it would be nice if you broke up your poems into stanzas. A stanza of 4 lines to a verse, it would make reading so much more enjoyable for the reader.

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by missy

    Great poem!! loved it, soo true. Nice work, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Hey this is a very good poem it reminds me of well me cuz that is how i am and it sucks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very deep! I love your words and feel every one!

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