Eternal Slumber

by Lovesick 4 Jesus   Dec 8, 2005


I want to go to sleep
and never wake up
i want to go to sleep
and keep my eyes closed shut

I want to go real deep
and cut to the vein
I want to leave this awful world
its making me insane

I want to go to Jesus
and hug him really close
I want to go above
i want to overdose

Overdose in pills
the sleeping ones
that it. I want to leave this
pain. Why do i go through
this s@#t?

I want to end my life
just take the knife and slash
I want to stop crying
my heart inside has crashed?

But can you understand that?
Can you feel my pain?
Can you see my sadness?
Or am i just insane?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    You're not crazy, we all feel like this at times, i sure know i do, but there is always SOMETHING to live for. Focusing on that helped me get through my hardest times. no matter how small or insignificant, there must be one little tiny thing you would miss if you were to leave. so hang in there.

    wonderfull poem, great rhyming pattern, and the repition in the first stanza set up a really good rythm. it was deep and full of emotion, a really good piece of art.

    keep writing,

    thanks for the comment

    xstrange angelx

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Nice poem 5/5 nice use of words real deep ...

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