Hey! You have a lot of talent.This poem is great, I can feel the emotion in it. The way you portrayed it is totally awsome. I feel for you....You've captured the whole essence of self harm, I can relate to it. Keep it up, and if you want somone to talk to, I'm always here. XxXxX

I REALLY REALLY like this poem! It's very original and the emotion was excellent! You have expressed the point very well and I really was touched by this poem! It's amazing! keep writing!

~BJ~

Really good poem, expresses a situation of true emotional status... loved it 5/5.

Wow!
That was eep and I love all the emotions you put into it. Well great work and it really touched me hun. If you ever need to talk Im here for you
xoxJuls(aka Julie)

Wow!!! i love it and i can so relate to it and i mean if great that you can make the reader feel what you feel i mean that is so great!!!!!
love Ness

Omgosh son of ...daaanng.!! that is just freakin awsome writing right there, no doubt about that, i know exactly how you feel i can relate so much of this, i you just made the words jump right out, so much emotion in it i love it awsome work here. much Love

Nick

Wow. this poem is really great! i can totally relate to it, sad to say, but i know what its like to go through that and it sucks. buy anyways great piece,continue writtng.

That was real good

WOW dis was lyk brilliant gal.....lved it....keep it up though...gav it a 5/5 n tc mwaz xoxox

Wow great poem I love it. one of the best poems Ive seen very exceptional

Hey Roxy this poem is really good! it seems you have really writen from the heart and it great! keep writing i hope to read more of your poems!

Awesome. i loved it. but one tiny thing: on the last line i think it should start with battle instead of the last line ending with it... i dont know.. i just think it would flow better that way... awesome anyways.. i shall read more...bwa... xoxo CheRRy

Very nice poem, well written and great ending keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow i loved it keep up the great work 5/5 Xox Laura Marie Xox

Thz

Wow, excellent poem!! i loved it, really well written. 5/5,
take care,
xxEmmaxx

Wow what a painful and so well written poem, great flow and rhyming, I just love it....It's like you have written this poem with my words...
Cool your name is Stelmack, why did you change it?? You know, we are the only family in the world whos lastname are spelled Stelmach, so I guess we are related =0) That's kinda funny, don't ya think?? I know I have family in Australia too...

Much Love Sabrina

I thought this poem was very very very very good...wow it was written so well, the perfect words were used, and it has related so much to what ive gone through in like 2 years. yes, sadly, ive had my battles against a blade, but ive been winning everyone for about 10 months which is awesome cuz i lost everyone for about a year and a half...but its over now...i hope youre okay, you did a beautiful job..i gave it a 5

I thought this poem was very very very very good...wow it was written so well, the perfect words were used, and it has related so much to what ive gone through in like 2 years. yes, sadly, ive had my battles against a blade, but ive been winning everyone for about 10 months which is awesome cuz i lost everyone for about a year and a half...but its over now...i hope youre okay, you did a beautiful job..i gave it a 5

Wow..
i have to tell you, i don't know what made me come look at your poem, i don't usually respond to quotes like that, but i am so glad i did
you are a talented writer, and i totally admire your strength in trying to give this up- it's a hard struggle, i've been there
but, if you think you can win the fight, all the more to you
you're stronger than i'll ever be, just for saying it out loud
good luck, and keep writing!!

kathrynn