My Guardian Angel

by nobody truly knows me   Dec 12, 2005


*please vote and leave comments. this one is special to me*

I'm broken, i'm lying on the floor
i'm more shattered than i've been before
my pieces are scattered all over the room
i realize i need help, i need it soon
but help will not come, not today, not ever
i'm destined to be like this forever
to be left alone, with my suffering, my pain
to know that my life will never be the same
i'm huddled up in this lonely dark corner
my happiness lost in this bleak, painful nightmare
and then you came, a light in the dark
you've somehow found a way to mend my broken heart
a heart that's been torn, by oh so very many
a heart that's blocked out all happiness and tranquility
i don't know how you know when i'm pretending
i'll never figure out when you know when i'm lying
all i know is that you saved me
you brought me back to reality
and i know i want to thank you
my dear sweet friend, my guardian angel

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  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This, this piece is amazing! I love the imagery and the simplicity of your words (yet they seem so.powerful) Your emotion is definately felt by the audience and that is a great.skill. Marvelous job, I love this. The subtle rhymes were a fantastic touch.

  • 15 years ago

    by viraz vitalia

    Superior Performance I can really relate to this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Words can't express how beautiful this poem is...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    This is amazing! I love when the beginning part depicts you on the floor. Great peom!

  • 17 years ago

    by xbrokinxlillxgirlx

    I liked this poem it feels so true . thankx for the comment u left me :)