I really loved this poem huni! sorry i havent commented lately but my mum took my keyboard away! this is so good i just loved it! i guess it doesnt really relate 2 me right now coz im having some problems but hey it gives me hope! i love ur writing and hun keep shining! luv yaa

Wow this is amazing! You're a great writer!

Wow this is amazing! You're a great writer!

This is realy good....amazing, I like the whole idea...5/5

::MELI::

Fantastic.

I've written a poem similar to that before, however my poem pales in comparison to your clear mastery of poetry.

I love love love this poem..it shows alot about ur caracter...well 5/5 as always u always seem to inspire me...keep up the great job

WOW!!awwwwwww i loved it so much that was a great poem i loved it!!
You have a lot of talent it was so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Wow... loved it as always... again your writing amazes me day after day and i just love reading your poems when you write new ones... this poem is one of my favorites of your... keep it up!

sammie

Wow... loved it as always... again your writing amazes me day after day and i just love reading your poems when you write new ones... this poem is one of my favorites of your... keep it up!

sammie

Loved it hun!
great poem it's truly original and soo sweet!!
lol..love lots xoxo

Omgsh..!! beautiful..! i wish that would happend to me ..lol...

Hell0 darl!! that was s0o g0od. what a beautiful piece. l0ved it!! very t0uching keep it up! =)

Awww... this one's so sweet. great poem.

OMG WoW that was really great, i felt what you wrote.You have a talent thats for sure..Look at some of my poems and tell me what you think. Take care, Love Nat mwa

Thiz poem wuz good

That was really nice and sweet. i liked it.
u can check ot some of mine also. keep writing dear

Aww..this is really sweet... I loved it...

Thats soo cute....i like it a lot!!!

Aww thats soo cute

Omg i