My Bloody Blade

by anastasia   Dec 15, 2005


I'm sorry for all those i have hurt
Through this depressing act
I'm sorry i was not alert
From stopping not so fast

I'm sorry it's to late
The deed had been done
There's no one stopping my fate
I must tell you before im gone

I'm sorry for all the pain
I have put you all through
I'm sorry for the things
i did and didnt do

Now my smile comes to a fade
My spirit will now sore
Because of that bloody blade
Lying on the bathroom floor

plz rate so i no what u think so i can make them better

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  • 18 years ago

    by dwight

    I like the poem, but there isn't anything reaaaaaaaaaaally good in it, so I'll give it a 4. Loved the way you said sorry, the way you wrote, but the personal note, that what makes it different from everything else is missing.
    love to read more from you
    dwight

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