This is our god

by Truly in Love   Dec 16, 2005


* Before you read this- please do not get influenced by my words... I'm sorry if this poem hurts your beliefs and your love for god... This something I'm feeling at the time... Hope you understand

The one who teaches of love
But then makes you h a t e
Gives you understanding
But then says it's too late

The one who makes rich richer
And forces the poor to die
The one who says that truth is the way to life
But he's the one who knows how to truly lie

The one who gave darkness to your past
But now promises that the future's happiness will last

The one who brings the sun down each evening to tell you that you're alone for the night
Yet, sarcastically wishes you sweet dreams of the next morning's light

Does it make sense to believe in someone who only believes in fooling you
The one who pushes you towards d e a t h even after he knew

he steals all your sanity
And leaves your heart in poverty

" This is our god"

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  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    I must say -good job. yeah it happens wat u wrote. but remember if u curse god wen nothing goes fine , then dont ever forget to give him the credit if something goes absolutely fine.
    well very beautifully written!
    keep it up!
    bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I wish you could have written more on this matter...just let this flow carry on forever...as i totally agree with u for once again. do i still hv to say that it was a "great poem".... beautifully written and a great theme.... keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I agree with you to an extent. That god lies greatly and it is best to avoid it at all costs. good poem I really liked it