by Samantha Dec 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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He hits her sometimes |
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Brilliant peice, great flow and comntent |
by Sherry Lynn
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Overall, very good. I would try not to start a line with words like.. the, and, or, but ... to me it seems as though these little words interrupt the flow, but that is just my opinion. |
by Lucy D1am0nd
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Omg this poem is so much like whats going on in my life right now and has been for the last ten years. Thank you for knowing exactly how it is. |