Your words are powerful. I could feel what you were feeling .

This is really great.i kno wat u're feelin. keep it up hun

Wow what a beautiful poem Steph. Very well done. So sad girl. Hope you are ok. I love you lots. -xxx-

Good, who's it about?

AWWWWWWW...i'm almost cryed while i was reading it......Keep it up the good job Steph.

much love from

Jammal

I have a poem similar to this one, so I know how you feel, it must been hard, cause it had been very hard for me, hope you are okay...

Awesome poem, 5/5 great imagery, try.

Great poem def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Nice 5/5. also check out my poem mirror mirror by big rob

Hey thanks for the comment. This poem is amazing when I read it I felt like I was reliving something. I know what its like Good Job

xox

Really sad poem but a great way of expressing your emotions. v good x

~zap~

I'm stunned.

g/w I like this, i can relate to the other one more though.

Ian