My Paradise

by nobody truly knows me   Dec 18, 2005


To take away my pain...
I'll create my paradise
A world that is seen...
only by my eyes
This cruel reality...
slips away
Whenever I feel this pain...
Each day
When I want to cry...
I go to hide
I slip away...
Into my mind
I'll hide there all day...
Until the night
When my tears fall I realize...
Nothings all right

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  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    It was good
    I really liked it ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Very good, i liked it. it is like how i feel... "I'll create my paradise
    A world that is seen...
    only by my eyes"
    that and then the end when u realize that everything isn't ok. i just liked it all in all... great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Good poem... i liked it..

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The first two lines got me thinking. Which I liked :) Very nice poem.

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