I am...A Friend no more!

by NeoDaDevil   Dec 20, 2005


Oh! why did I rebuke you,
Why did I not feel your pain.
Why did i not ask you,
Why did I break your heart.
You asked me to stop,
You told me you weren't happy.
I didn't listen to you,
Kept on my cruel jokes.
You finally got angry,
Broke our friendship.
I accept my mistake,
I feel the pain now.
I only ask for forgiveness,
I was not a true friend.
I don't want you to be friends,
I deserve this dire strait.
I only ask that you forgive me,
I only ask that you remember me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SufferingAlone

    DAMN UR REALLY GOOD WHEN I PUT SOME POEMS ON MINE PLEZ CHECK THEM PUT

  • 18 years ago

    by Sami

    Awesome poem man
    really like it
    whos da person
    u gotta tell me/ or better yet u have to tell me!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Neo, I liked this poem. Although..regreting what you have done isnt goinjg to solve much. You must tell him/her how you feel and make it alright between you both. If the person doesnt understand, give that person space to think. Nice work overall.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I read this and sort of imagined a little boy at the window saying the words. It's quite sweet I guess. The ending is quite comforting, but I think you could've endowed on this alot more. Your lines are very basic and the beginning is a bit melodramatic for my liking. I do like the ending alot though. Nice work.
    -Laura.

  • 18 years ago

    by why me

    Dang.........your good you now how to put it out there......she should forgive you nice poem

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