I want something more.

by Bertha   Dec 21, 2005


You tell them that you want me.
I think finally.
You hold me tight..
The feeling lasting..endlessly.
I never want-
This feeling to end-
But then you say..
That were just friends?
I start to cry.
Why dont you feel the same?
You're breaking my heart.
I really want to hate you.
You're tearing me apart.
Cause you walked right out the door.
And I say.
I dont want to be just friends-
I want something more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Fine write...however I think if you only work on its form a little bit, it'd be much better and catchy.

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    This is an exellent poem!! I love it, keep it up Bertha!!! check out more of my pems if you get the chance!! you a very talented writer ( :