The day i died

by cassanova   Dec 25, 2005


Me and her use to have a blast, cant believe only 5 days have
past.
theres one thing i cant believe,
and one thing I'm gonna miss,
s**t tonights Christmas eve,
and her birthday is ((12.25.86)Christmas,
what makes it worse,
alone i sit in this seat,
shes out of reach,
but only lives across the street...
and i cant believe,
how everyday i watch her leave...
we use to talk about the future and what was in store,
how we wanted 2 dogs 3 kids that we'd so adore.
she said i was sweet,
but sometimes mean,
baby people change but its the past she seen.
she said there was things that bothered her from the past,
thats the no.1 reason we didn't last
now i know how to let my love show,
its sadly time to let my sweetheart go

to my Nicole

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  • 14 years ago

    by Su

    This is sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's very good, and so sad.
    I like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    That was really awesome, sorry i've only just got round to reading it
    it was so sad and so true, i know how that feels, where emotion just takes over, and how strong did they wanna be?!
    really really good
    5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Your poems are so good because you write about things that really have happened to you. I hope someday I will have the courage to do that! Beautiful poem, sad but you really know how to express your feelings. I hope it helps a little.

    5/5 always Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo88

    I'm sorry about nokle u rilly love her

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