WhaT DoEz He FeEL

by stephyG   Dec 27, 2005


When i look into his eyes
does he want to look me back?
when i hold his hand so tightly
does he feel the love impact
when i kiss him on the neck
does he feel my sweet embrace?
when i ask him to be honest
would he look me in the face?
when i tell him how much i care
would he stay with me forever?
if my feelings were ever hurt
would he come to me wherever?
when i do all that i can
would i come before his friends?
or is this just lust
where he doesn't care how it ends?
what i want to know
is he feeling me for real?
when he looks into my eyes
what does my baby boy feel?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like this one also, a very nice rhyme/flow to it.At first I thought some of the lines (like the 2nd one) had an awkward feel to them, but actually upon re-reading it, it works well because it is not the usual phrasing.Love, loss, and the wondering & doubts of love seem to be your strong point as you really capture that emotion and convey it with such a soft strength.I'm impressed.

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Thats a sweet tender poem , yes true love is beyong lust its kinda heavenly in nature.
    Thanks for commenting , really appreaciate it.

    chavii.

  • 18 years ago

    by Perfect Failure

    Wow that was soo good
    i love it
    keep it up
    xox
    Renee

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