Not Sure..

by stephyG   Jun 15, 2006


Guys not sure What i Should title should be.. please give me some ideas!! thanks so much!

i think in circles
its never clear
as to who i am
or why I'm here
i wonder when
i ask myself how
i look for answers
but theres no way out
sometimes i smile
but don't feel it inside
sometimes i want to scream
sometimes i want to hide
i ask myself whats real
and if i should go on
do they really know me
am i where i belong?
i guess for now ill stay
wondering just what to do
i wish i had an answer
to show me the way through..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I like it, :). It expresses well; if you read it closely, though - the meaning of the poem is searching - an expedition, if you will. I do write those, but I do not post them. Great poem! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Well-done dear......sincere clarity on the problem...(plus a bit of prayer for help)....can, and often does, indeed, lead to genuine clarity on the solution........
    Strive on!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    This poem is so nice! Thoughts... confusions... Decisions... All are very much part of our lives. But one thing I must say that Stephy is a very good Poetess! Very much sure about that!

  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    It was a beautifully written poem! I can relate it to myself indeed, and sometimes I guess we all feel that way. Anyway about the title, im not sure either...But the poem was worth reading so I think it isnt the important thing though.
    I loved it! Well done!
    xx

    ...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This was a beaufitul poem. Full of emotion and confusion in yourself. I really liked it. It had a great stanza and a nice flow. Excellent job. keep it up.

    and thanks for your comment :). its very much appriciated.

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