How He Will Make You Feel

by Fredaeya   Dec 27, 2005


****Please vote a 5 if you've ever felt this way****

Have u ever had that feeling where Ur stomach is so uptight u feel like Ur going to fall over. And just after talking to him, you feel like your going to be sick,Literally? And you wanna cry but you just can't seem to? Although your so upset your contemplating suicide? Ever wanted to call him and after hours and hours of building up the courage, you wither and die at just the sound of his voice? And you sit there wondering if he's thinking of you when in the back off your mind you know he isn't but you still wonder, and there is still that itty bitty bit of hope there? How you see him with her, and although you can feel your heart breaking and collapsing onto the ground in a withered mess, you can't help but smile as you see him hold her hand? And you remember E V E R Y S I N G L E M O M E N T Y O U E V E R S P E N T W I T H H I M, even the small things, like the time you were in the lunch line and he gave you that extra 10 cents you needed? Have you ever wanted him to be there so bad, you'd do anything to have it come true, because missing him makes you literally sick, but at the same time, you'd do anything to to banish him from your mind, you life, forever, because you know there's no use chasing something that ain't gonna stop and is going to out run you. Ever felt so confused you couldn't do anything because E V E R Y T H I N G is what you wanted and E V E R Y T H I N G is what your feeling?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Well i never felt that way in my life, even if its a girl and not a guy. but anyway i like the poem, its well written, that i could not help but rating it a 5/5. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Hey i think we're all in the same boat here lol as much as it hurts too say...i feel exactly like that though....its like no matter how many times somebody will tell me i can do so much better it just can't erase my feelings for him. Sorry to go on and on lol but what i'm trying to say is you really captured our emotions in this. It was beautiful
    luv jess xoxo
    ps---my name so-over-him...well i was trying to convince myself lol and its not working

  • 18 years ago

    by Caitlin

    I feel the same too I still can't get over him and no matter how much I try I can't forget him he is always on my mind OMG I wanna die I miss him so much but that was great

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    That's like EXACTLY how i feel. Its so confusing, its like I m happy 4 his gf, but like i want him so bad. And yeah i know i should 4 get him, but the problem is HOW. anyway, nice job. I have a feling you feel the same way