Wow i really loved it i always felt the same way although i was skinnier then all my friends i still felt fat and i hated myself but i really do try to look at myself how everyone else sees me so yea this poem was one of my favorites. Good job.♥

This hurts me to read.... a friendof mine recently stoped purging...she got pregnate. however she still thinks her self fat...she cant deal with it. she thinks that she is ugly. and she sleeps around just to get attention and notice. she yearns to be accepted...

Ihope that you truly do not feel this way about yourself. the poem is to emotinal for me to make a comment on it itself.

This goes to the extreme quiet a bit. I like how you mix a very real problem with your imagination - the cutting up your skin etc.

Yeah I know the feeling. Im not really fat either but I get really really guilty if I gain weight. I like the poem!

This is good....even if a little sick...lol but i agree with Ariana, real life and your imagination really work well together on this one. 5/5 jesx

Wow, this is what many girls these days think about...wanting to look like the models on TV and wanting what they seem is out of reach for themselves. I dont know what goes through a mind of an "overwieght" person but I think you captured it very well.

Another great poem or yours, i like this one because even though it doesn't describe how u or i feel, some girls feel like they would do anything to be pretty when most of them already are. maybe not to that extent but maybe u kno what i mean... 5/5

I like it alot. 5/5. some days i think i am under weight, so i try to gain weight and my boyfriend and my best friend tell me to stop because i dont need to gain weight. grest poem.

Its deep for a person coming up w/ it for the heck of it. wow, u are definetly talented. i liked it
love lots,
sore

Nice poem but is that how u feel about yourself just keep up the good work

Wow. wow wow wow. it's like ur writing about me! well done!
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Well im glad its not based on real events! good descriptions though, the feelings seemed so real whilst i was reading it. xx

Nice poem! It was a well written poem! A bit extreme but still pretty good!
^_^ -cheers-

Cool pome! im ana soo i no how u feel! and my bf freaks out too lol grate rite!

Some of the parts were very good, like

can't make fun of me more.
so I'll open up the door.
get the knife out of the sink.
I'll lift up my shirt.
make a mark from a pen.
and i start to cut off my skin.

To me that was the only part that really flowed with anythign. I'm sure you could work on this to make it even better. 4/5

Bryce

I like it. i mean you showing what you truely feel. what you think would happen if you tried on your own. i love it!! good job. keep up the good work!

I actually feel this way sometimes so even if it wasnt based true i can relate to the poem alot no im not fat either but i get critisized about it alot so nice job!