My mIStAkE

by SoPhIa sEmEnS   Dec 30, 2005


You told me you loved me,
then you left me like that
your heart is so cold
and your brain is so flat.
to know what i had makes me cry
when i look in the mirror i take a big sigh
you had my heart, then ripped it out
looking at you all i see is dought
looking through my past
it runs from me so fast
is this what love is??
because i dont wanna live like this..
you were in my heart, very deep
and then we loved and took a big leap
that was our mistake
because i found out you were fake

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  • 20 years ago

    by k i k i

    Nice work :)
    Thanks for your comment..
    Take care xx

  • 20 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece. very well d0ne f0r ur first. l0t 0f em0ti0n in it. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t. h0pe u had a w0nderful xmas and all ur wishes came true. keep up the great w0rk!

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 20 years ago

    by cayce

    I like this poem its really good i can really relate

  • 20 years ago

    by SoPhIa sEmEnS

    I like it cuz it was my first poem that came to me without thinking too hard

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