Another beautiful poem...very well done! Bravo! *stands and applaudes*

By this line: Sugar Can Kisses, did you mean Sugar Cane?

Great job! Brilliant!

Wow....another wonderful job. Especially the end. The flow was excellent. Take Care Nikki and stay strong, we all love you here. Happy New Year XXXXX
JL

Wonderful poem, beautifully written!

Wonderfully, melancholy poem, full of emotion and bitter sadness, well done, I am truly blown away, a wonderful poem from a wonderful young lady, well done!

"Sugar Cane Kisses
Melt Upon My Tongue
Melancholic Memories
Broken Hearts Had Sung"

Loved this stanza..

This is really good! I love these words!
"Clouds Stitch The Sky
Crocheting Dews Of Gray"
Great job, truly remarkable!

Once again hun, you are amazing! Beautifully written and definately unforgettable. There aren't enough words in my vocabulary to tell you how much I enjoyed that one...Say, have you been published yet? ( I'm serious, if you haven't, we need to find you an editor and see what he thinks! I have alot of faith in you - and you just gave us all reason to!)

Thank-u So Much Steph! I've Never Thought Of Publishing My Poems Because I Never Thought They Were Good Enough :) But I'll Strongly Consider It xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x