Comments : Mommy's Little Soldier

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    This was a beautiful poem.....i didn't think that it would end this way but that is what made it even more breathtaking....i loved the first and last stanza!!!! Great poem!!!
    luv jess xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    This was a beautiful poem.....i didn't think that it would end this way but that is what made it even more breathtaking....i loved the first and last stanza!!!! Great poem!!!
    luv jess xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I enjoyed this poem. It was nicely written and I especially loved what you did with the first and last stanzas. Keep writing I love reading them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    My god, you have frequently commented my poems and love, I regret never reading more then that one of yours. you are amazing. 5/5, take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    DDDAAAAAAAMMMMM******** that was great right there, by far one of the best i have ever read seriously that was AWESOME, that was just......im speechless, SUPERB job, excellent excellent excellent....5/5 no doubt

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Excellent! I mean alot of feeling. A lot of emotions. Wow. Oh yeah I got my first award. Finally. It took me forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    That was good and very sad. i love the emotion. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Aww thats so sad...well I guess thats why im reading in the sad poem area. Great work though I cant wait to read more. keep it up

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Wow and another amazing poem! Very emotional! I don't know what I should say: it's simply indescribable and breathtaking!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Fantastic!! Great flow. POWERFUL message shining a light on what is so so dark and hidden. Well done!! 5/5! Thanks for your kind comments on My poem & EVERY comment good or bad means something to me!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Her last tear was fatal~

    I really like your poem, it was emotional ,true, yet sad at the same time your very good
    -
    mia

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow this one is so sad, im almost sitting here in tears, you painted such a vivid picture in my head, you have a great way of showing so much emotion in a piece i loved it your an amazing poet, think im gonna add you to my favorites..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Wow...thats was a wonderfully sad poem...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Suck A Great Poem,, Your Description Is Great! I Really Loved It... Very Sad Though,, I Hope To See More Of Your Fantastic Work Soon,,
    Take Care,
    Luv,
    The Bell :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Belle

    OMG... That's so sad.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was VERY touching. I could actually picture what was happening and the title was just as good and thought provoking as the actual poem...great job once again. DEFINATELY a 5/5!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    That was really sad, I liked it, but it scared me a little, but still, it was a great poem, i really enjoyed reading, good luck with future writing..

    your faithful reader :P
    POLAROID