Full of grace

by libby   Jan 5, 2006


Quieres oir el corazon,
the other heart inside of you,
waiting to be born,
a life without the thorns?
She's just like you used to be.
This sound is just like prayer, almost.
It shakes and pulls you free
from past iniquities.

Wash the disease from the flowers,
it's really all that you can do,
cause you don't have the power.
Fly to the land of towers.
It may not be much better there.
Corruption, it is worldwide,
but they're not everywhere.
You don't have to be so scared.

Maria
You've been brave but now it's time to let it go
It's out there
I promise if you look you'll find it
If you see a fence you can always climb it
You've proven this, I know, just
Let it all go now
Maria

This is the first two verses and chorus (in that order) of a song that I'm writing, as of yet it's unfinished. It's based on the movie Maria Full Of Grace. Let me know if you think it's worth continuing.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    I think it's great, keep going with it!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    I think it has potential.