Wow!! thats an amazing poem dear...really liked it!!

Hey darl. a heartfelt piece. very tuching. very well written.

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Ohh wow, this is an absolute amazing poem, I can relate so much to it....Sounds just like me and my father in the past. Trust me, things DO get better as you both grow!!!

I will never be good enough for you,
but what ever will?
i try so hard, but fail,
did you know your words kill?

This is perfectly written, love these lines,so true =0)

Much Love Sabrina

Very very sad, Anna.

You know I am a huge fan of your poems--this one rocked, very emotional, and perfect--But please be happier!! Life might have handed you some tough deals, but look up. Smile, and be thankful for the things that are good.

You're awesome.

You Rock.

Matt

Awwww im sorry u feel that way dear..well great poem..and uve been a good friend to me..thanks for all the comments and support..Love Joclyn

Powerful words right there... ;D 5/5

Aw hun i'm sorry that you and your dad have this kind of relationship. but maybe some day it will get better. but no matter what never ever come even close to suicide. it would crush me to pieces. i cant live without you and your encouraging words! i know we've never met or anything like that, but trust me hun you mean sooo much to me. your a really great friend. lyl~lex
btw-my email is being weird. i'll email you as soon as i get it fixed!!!

I luv this p0em huni, u mean s0 much 2 me remember that nD i dunt want anything 2 happen 2 u c0z if it did then where w0uld that leave me?? im s0o c0nfused and upset nD i will b ther with y0o by ur side 4ever nD We will b ther 4 eachother! i luv y0o!

You always write amazing poems I always enjoy them I am becoming quite a fan of your writing

Good poem girl. Hope things work out between the two of you
Tim

Amazing! excellent!
very emotional. i love reading such poems and liked this one too.
keep it up!5/5
bharti

Aw wow hun! you took the words out of my mouth wow, for days ive been trying to write a poem about how i feel about the guy i like and this poem was it exactly what i needed wow, thank you so much for this and sorry i havent commented in a while, i havent had time to go onp&q. keep on writing though sweetie,xxoo

I really feel the same way!!!!!!!!!great poem!

Great, this is just awesome...

I read this before but I didn't comment, I don't know why. I read it before I did the name change, and it was so good, obviously I read it much more times. It flows so well and when I read it I have the perfect sound for it and tempo and everything, it is so amazing, I know so many people who have tried to write about that but just couldn't really figure out how to say it.

This is wonderful,
Keep up the good work.

PS: I got better at the commenting thing as you will see. Hehe

Thank u soooo much for commenting on my poem hun!! you have no idea how much it means to me. This is a really good poem btw... i hope one day things with shape up with you and your dad. But please don't say that suicide is close... i don't think i could live if you weren't here. thanks for everything hun. take care of urself. love ya, xoxoxo
(p.s. maybe one day someone other than you will read my poems!! lol)

I know i've already comented on this heh but i wanted to say i missed you too hun but I'm back on p&q now as much as I can so hopefully i'll be reading more of your excellent poems really soon, take care, hun, love yaaa