Please be honest.....if you feel i need improvment n/e where jsut tell my and i'll consider it .... i love critisism

I really liked this poem, I had to read it a couple times to pick out the full meaning of it but i really enjoyed it! It was VERY well written!

The 3 last stanzas are very good,the last one is the best,succeding to create the atmoshere you want(or I think you want:) )
I think you should work the beginning,it doesnot really cuptures the imagination,especially the second stanza Hve a nice day!

That was really ... great ...5/5

I got a little confused, but overall, it was pretty good.

-Taylor

Wonderful and unique poem. Excellent rhymes. Keep it up

~noni

This poem is beautifully written, nice descriptions, and it's very original. Keep writing. 5/5

I think of this as more of a sad poem, not love and romance. But i thought it was a good poem overall.

This is a really great poem. I don't know what it is about it, but I really like it! I really like the last stanza though, that's my favorite. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Wow holy moly friholy. This poem is amazing and blew me away. I actually love black roses lol, they are ever so pretty. But anyway my fave stanza is the last one, im not sure why i just love it. The whole poem just seems so elegent and just peacful. I love it. 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Yeah I liked the colourful descriptions in this poem! Maybe a bit too clichéisch for my taste... But that's only my opinion :) Overall its a very good poem!

Wow. great write. so beautiful.

A beautiful poem
you create great imagery
and its got a great flow
well done xxxxx

Wow this is really beautiful. you've taken such a cold topic, and transformed it into the most flowing beautiful poem ever... i love it, keep writing xxx

Wow this was breathtaking... nice job writing this... it flowed well and the story was amazing... keep it up

sammie

Wow,wow,wow is all i can say.
i love this poem. It really made sense. It had good flow and was amazing to read
keep it up
love tara
please check out mine

Wow that was truly amazing! the flow on the poem was wonderful! Keep up the great work and I make sure I read more poems of yours!

~Juls~aka Julie

I like this poem a lot, its almost,, i guess the word is fancy?
All the words ryhme perfectly making it flow better, great job.

Good work, this poem was very unique and well written. It was beautifully done.

I like it a lot! and i deffinitally like your choice of words they make it so much more interesting to read. great job.