I BEG OF YOU

by britt   Jan 6, 2006


Plz dont do it again
the thing u said
that u would stop with
the last red tear
running down your
arm
I kno you want to leave
this earth
but if you do
than who will be
the one to cry in
the rain with me
I beg of you dont do
this thing your about to
do
this one last request
I beg please dont
let the river of blood
run once again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    Thats freakin' excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Demian

    So sad

  • 18 years ago

    by Elijah

    Very very good. some one i love wrote a poem like this that saved me. if its about somebody let them know, it may help. again very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This poem has a very good meassage... i really liked it and how you wrote it... i flowed well and seemed true to the heart... i hope its not a true stroy, but if it is then you should probley let that person read this... it may help... nice job... and congads on a great write...

    sammie

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