Mirror

by britt   Jan 10, 2006


I looked in the mirror
And to my dismay
I saw my reflection
Staring back at me
When I saw this I
Started to cry
Because I dont want
To be me
With all my flaws&mistakes
Who would want to be me
If I cant even stand to be me
I stared a little longer
With tears streaming down
My face
I punched the mirror to
Make me go away
But only to find
That I was still here
Wishing and hoping
I would be gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Interesting choice of words. It reminds me of what happens when i used to look in the mirror.

    I think it's very well maintained and very well put togeather.

    Five

  • 18 years ago

    by katie hensley

    U have real talent. i love ur stuff!! keep it up!! i want more!! -k-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    *sighs* good poem. I feel like that sometimes. but I personally don't think ANYONE is terrible looking... (unless it's myself lol) so if this is about u then I want 2 encourage you... that you are unique and special and there is no one like you... i'm serious... but.. here I am lecturing lol... I really enjoyed this... keep writing hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Wow good poem. very strong words. thanks for commenting on my poem. i appreciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesika

    Very good. Keep up the excellent work.

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