Babe...h0oz this about? im sorry that this is happining babe, h0ld on, plz 4 me, i no u r in pain but life h0pefully will get betta...dont w0rry, i guess just dont think about the pain u go thru each day, distract urself, do anything but plz dnt hurt urself! i luv y0o

Sorrowfully sweet and powerful. a beautiful dedication and plead. wonderful job, straight from your heart. ;D 5/5

Sweet poem Hun, I hope your alright, come online and talk to me hunny! -huggs- I love you and W00T IM VOTE 3000!!!! congratz hunn!

Jenn -hugles-

Hey darl. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this p0em. very t0uchng piece. keep it up hun

l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Very nicely written . lovely words.
u write so true..
keep writing dear
bharti

Show her that you care, that you love her, and thet you need her around.
Good poem aswell
Tim

Aww hunni... I'm sorry things are so bad right now, but I hope things get better. If you ever need to talk I'm always here... Great writing

Awww hun this is so sad, i hope everythings okay with you, im here for ya always eventhough im not online that much i will always be here for you, amazing poem btw, the words are aboustely beautiful.

Awww anna this is so sad. i'm really sorry that this is all happening. but really all this stuff cant be your fault. trust me on this one. so don't feel like you screwed up or your the bad guy cuz your not. don't think that way. right now just try to be strong for your mom cuz it sounds like she needs you to be there. lots of love babe!!! i'm here if you need anything. lyl~lex

Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!

Oh this is such a sad poem, an so beautifully written. i can relate to this poem quite well, and i know wat ur going through. try and stay strong huni, and never blame urself! u cant help how uv been feeling and its not ur fault. remember that.
take care xxxxx

Absolutely fantastic! I loved this poem. Beautiful written. It really flows. Dam I can't believe how talented you are! haha =)

PS: thank you for your comment on my poem Paradise of Lies, It meant a lot of me.... the inspiration? Well I lost a good friend 2 years ago =(, and on the exact day he died ( 2 years later) , I wrote that poem. Your comment meant a lot to me. Thank you =).

I love you sweety -xxx-
Hugz

Amazing as always you always write great poems we can talk some time I hope to catch you in the chat room sometime

That was a great poem i loved it i hope u r ok! anyway keep up with the good work!!!!!!

I'm very sorry I haven't commented in a while--lots of stuff.

Ew, I hate being busy.

Anyways, I truly loved this poem. It deserves more than an full point score...Anna, you are stunning. And hey--it's about your mom! lol. Well anyways, great job. I don't think you realize how inspiring you are. Thank you for it all...the heartfelt comments, votes and attention--everything.

You rock.

Matt, the best

(maybe I should give up my "title"...give it to someone more deserving, like you.

Smile?

Outstanding dear...this is just so amazing....wat a way to xpress...u hv a talent & i m sure i m not the first or last one to say this..:o)

take care and stay strong